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Helen Patrice's avatar

Maid Maleen in the Dark Tower

Seven years in the cold tower,

with only the blade of women's talk

to cut the quiet.

Seven years of food

getting ever more stale,

harder to cut,

more difficult to portion.

Seven years away from the world,

but even through stone walls

we can sense change,

as faint sounds move from wooden wheels

to those encased in iron.

Seven years to sharpen a knife

slick enough to scrape out mortar.

Seven stones removed to let in the sunlight.

This is how long it took me

to cut through red tape,

and receive labels

that shed light on who I am.

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Steph Rae Moran's avatar

I found it intriguing that escaping the tower was only the beginning of the story. Surviving hunger and poverty, and then finding the strength to reclaim herself as the true bride seemed the more difficult task for Maid Maleen. I'm not sure how often the exploration of psychological trauma appears in fairy tales. For me, it added depth and realism to the story. Also, the information in the footnotes was extremely interesting--thank you for including them.

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